Boats

Renoise Songs
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Right, now that I’ve pretended to know what I’m talking about when I’m commenting on other people’s music…

Retaliation time.

It’s called Boats.

I’m calling it a work in progress since it was a recent one-day thing and could, (and hopefully will), benefit from a bit more work.

Thoughts, suggestions, any sort of feedback is appreciated.

http:nevermind…

(Also, is there a way to embed the waveform player with a free soundcloud account, or is that $$$ only?)

edit- thanks ceero

http://player.soundcloud.com/player.swf?url=http://soundcloud.com/the-land-elevator/boats width=100% height=81[/embed]

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You can do it. Like this:

  
http://player.soundcloud.com/player.swf?url=http://soundcloud.com/ceero/ceero-parka width=100% height=81[/embed]

Will listen to your track in a bit

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Sorry I didn’t give feedback sooner, last time I listened to it I didn’t really know what to say…

Like the track, nice feel to it, easy going and smooth. Drums could use some sharpening up though I think… Maybe layer a bright kick (cut bottom, more highs) on top of the one already there and some more bright frequencies on the rest? Not talking about the loop (I think :P)

Sorry my feedback’s a bit thinner than yours, you seem to be a lot better at that than me

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Thanks for the feedback, man.
Listening to it again, yeah, think you’re dead on, I’ll have to work on that.