I am trying to do some breakcore
please give feedback !
edit : I putted some bass and did some other changes
Pretty nice!
And now the feedback part 
I think the drums are far too loud for the strings, it might sound a lot better if the drums are less loud (in volume) so the track will have a more balanced “feel”
I 'm also missing a bassline in this tune.
Now the song is only strings a lot of breaks and a appreggio-synth at the end.
Especialy in “the club” there must be a bassline 
Good luck!
btw did you listen to the “rossz csillag alatt született” album of Venetian snares before you made this track?
Thanks for the feedback 
Yes you are right the bass is missing… i have some problems to have a bass that doesn’t dissapear behind all the drums. I will try to find one.
And yes of course it has some venetian snares influence (that suck a little, i would like to do something that doesn’t sound “like venetian snares but less good”)
expiriment with the eq!! you’ll see that every bass will fit!
Okay
Hey i’ve seen your “marbles” video on youtube some time ago. You rock !
Ah yeah, this song is one of my favorites from vsnares. I’m always wondering how he did at moment 0:37 with all the fast little sounds…
Thats just a lot of samples at hi speed chopped of with the “off” buttun.
check these .xrns tunes of “Benefit of the Boomerang”
a lot of learnfull stuff in those beats 