Ceero - Flyer19

Renoise Songs
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And here’s today’s results. Moving in the right direction imo, but what do you say? Improvement or not? Thoughts?

http://player.soundcloud.com/player.swf?url=http://soundcloud.com/ceero/ceero-flyer28 width=100% height=81[/embed]

Work in progress. Any thoughts?

http://soundcloud.com/ceero/ceero-flyer19

http://player.soundcloud.com/player.swf?url=http://soundcloud.com/ceero/ceero-flyer19 width=100% height=81[/embed]

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some melody on low-mid freq would be nice…and also ofc some breaks and pauses and some shift part with another key.
some emotions…

3

yeah, that is exactly what i meant :rolleyes:

4

hehe… i will, just had to lay it aside a bit, i’d been sitting with it far too many hours and needed a break.

Not totally sure where to take it at the end there though. Maybe I’ll try funky-ing up the bassline a bit

And edit: I still think my tracks sound very “thin”… Any suggestions on how to make it sound fuller?

5

Uploaded today’s results:

http://player.soundcloud.com/player.swf?url=http://soundcloud.com/ceero/ceero-flyer28 width=100% height=81[/embed]

6

yeah, I like it :) but still some more melodic stuff would be nice :)

7

This is definately a 2.30 in the morning track, my eyes a blurring to the rythm of this track, goes pretty well :yeah: :blink:
I like the roundness of the beats,sounds pretty well mastered.I dont know about a melody over it, but some weird vocal samples that nobodys ever heard would be quite cool.Like william s borroughs reading out some crazy shit. (but i think that one has been done!!)