Hi. I wrote a song. Are the levels and eq ok? Is it worth listening to more than once or more than partially?
I dig it. I would listen again.
Also like it. Anyway I would exchange all the dnb-breaks with a half-time trappy, off-grid (in Renoise delayed) drum pattern. Why ? Because I assume, it fits the hazy delivery of the lyrics much better.
Regarding the mix : It is not bad. Did you record the lyrics in Renoise ? 
Yeah, I recorded the vocals in Renoise, since you can sync the recording to the start of the pattern. Probably not good that I record in a noisy room though. Thanks for listening 