Couple of tracks

Hi

Renoise user from Poland (since 2009). Im really interested in your opinion on my music - structure, mastering etc. (everything was composed, mixed and mastered in renoise).

tracks on bandcamp

https://theeleventh.bandcamp.com/track/pathetic

https://theeleventh.bandcamp.com/track/high-fiving-cosmic-entities

tracks on soundcloud (different)

Thanks!

tracks on bandcamp

Love the rhythm of “Unhappy Carbon” and the drum breaks in 2nd part :slight_smile:

Mastering wise nothing to complain about “Unhappy Carbon” and “Tobacco”, where the sound of the first is my favorite - sounds very pleasant, present and differenciated to me.

“You have To Heal Me” sounds a bit “in the background”, and sometimes the stereo effect sounds weird, a bit artificial to me, e.g. the bass synth starting from 0:48. As if you would have used stereo-widening plugins or something?

Otherwise, good stuff :slight_smile:

Yeah, you are probably right about synth you mentioned (it is too wide). Thanks for your opinion!:slight_smile: