Drill´n´bass and acid.

Renoise Songs
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Hello, two songs of mine:

Drill´n´bass, starts one way,ends differently.

https://soundcloud.com/agradable/il-garcha

Acid,timbre changing in the melodies.

https://soundcloud.com/agradable/charme-al-por-mayor

Hope you like them!

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heard some of your tracks … i like them but i have some input for you…

try to bring some freshness as referring to the breaks section… the amen break is too much overused so atleast bring few more breaks so i’ll have some variety in my ears …

try to avoid dblue glitch vst… or use it in a original way… it been to common to use and all too much tracks used it badly , like u know after one second “ohh that’s dblue glitch again”

i think if u looking to get to a bigger crowd your vocals should be in english (just my opinion…)

in some tracks , your have outro which is too long and you could easily cut them out , talking about IL garcha (6:45) ,
and zearpeido (8:02 !!)

looking forward for more fresh stuff , good luck

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I dig the beat. :)

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First track, I really dig your playful style, like you’re really just having fun with the music. I agree with Burital in regards to the breaks, they you could use some more variety. Some sections overstay their welcome, I think they feel too long because of the relentless glitches and lack of variety in the glitches. I like the thereminesque outro of IL Garcha.

Cool chords in the second track, changing timbres are interesting. The drums are better too and you still have that kind of playfulness. I really like this one!

Keep making music and never lose that playfulness!

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One thing I did notice was that there are places where your samples cut off oddly and make that low frequency pop sound. I don’t know if this was intentional, but it was a bit odd and seemed amateurish.

Honestly though, I loved the first one.

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Burital, Alien7, Hyaenaboy,Agargara, thank you for your feedback, it was really helpful.Makes me aware of not making beginner´s mistakes again.On glitch, yes it was too much, I think I was absorbed by it.And my breaks,add more , not just the amen…Hyaenaboy, I noticed that pop when I cut the sample in IL Garcha and let it be a part of the music, just used it as it was another sound, I liked it.
Thanks again, guys,it seems you listened the songs thoroughly,and that´s is so giving on your side!