http://soundcloud.com/roppenzo/probeerseltje-april
Still unfinished… comments are welcome 
it takes 2.15 to hear a different melody. that’s a bit long for me, i got bored with that melody after 1.30 or sooner. what you could consider is making your intro-melody different from the main melody-line, then when you get to the breakdown, you just continue like you do now. that would stir it up a bit.
the sounds are nice enough, though i’d maybe turn down the reverb a bit. sounds like it has potential, good luck with it!