Feedback on "dark electro"

I know this song is total bullshit, but I have to post it here anyway in order to see, what are your opinions of my build-ups and what should I improve (bass, beat, leaders, etc…). Please give me feedback, thanx.

Balancing the bass is key to this kind of stuff - it’s what you feel when standing in front of those 18" speakers
Generally speaking, I would transfer some low end from the intro’s “thumb sound” into the sawish bass that is introduced along with the beat at 0:30. That bass feels a bit weak…

Other than that, I can only say keep up the good work!