I like it man…if it was my tune I would add some slight reverb and/or panning to the melody. Just sounds kinda flat, and the drums are mono/centered anyway…but interesting nonetheless. Chiptunes remind me of many cool NES/SNES scores, so keep’em commin. 
Thanks for the tips man, i think i’ll work a bit more on it, i also noticed the volume decreased a lot when i converted to mp3 with Super for some reason. 
I’m tired of mixing on shitty creative speakers, i need some decent monitors. 