didn’t do much for me hseiken, have nothing with the original. Hard to find a direct ’ line’ in the melody right away, lill all over the place,… can’t go wrong in the beat department. Where do you want to go with this yourself?
IMO you should bin it. “Illegal alien” doesn’t give much to work with anyway, no catchy melody or anything else either. Atleast I wouldn’t remix this kind of song.