Can someone do me a favour and check the sound quality of my mastered track? i need meaning of other ppl with diff. speakers…
thx in advance 
Sounds nice for me, very good stereo picture. The only caveat would be the bass, especially the bassdrum is too silent/underepresent, missing more punch.
That’s a beautiful track, but I personally like the first version better as far as EQ and leveling goes. The second track sounds too bass-heavy and compressed. I’m listening to both on a pair of M-Audio BX5 D2s, and they’ve got a reasonably flat response with good low end.
There seems to be some crackly distortion in the mix of the first one, though, possibly compression or dynamics-processing artifacts. I’ve gotten similar noise doing dynamics processing on tracks with lots of deep reverb.
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I looked at the spectrum for your first rendering in GoldWave, and the frequency slope is a lot closer to -10dB per decade/-3dB per octave. That slope (which is roughly equal-loudness for all frequencies) generally gives you a mix that translates better across many different sound systems. The second rendering has a much steeper slope, which means the frequency balance is biased toward the low end. It also looks like you ran it through a peak limiter and dropped the output gain, almost a digital version of shredding.
Flavor to taste, really, but I say your mixing is much better on the first version 
thx for the feedback…the noise at the 1st mix is the tape recording sound which i used at the intro…i had to disable it on the main patterns. hmm ok i try to find a middle now! 
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