Hurt You (Would You Mind)

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Not too shabby, but i got really tired of the repetitive female vocals after hearing it three times, after 30 i almost pulled my hair out, lucky i have very short hair. :P
The “let’s go” phrase is plain awful imo and what’s up with the ending?

did it hurt?

I didn’t mean to be so harsh, after all it’s not bad, but i’m being honest about the vocal stuff, it’s just my opinion though. :)

hi, i actually do agree with your points, thank you for pointing them out! that’s why i post songs here in the first place :] , will update it some more…