hey nick ! I love electrodark music. This one isn’t too industrial/gothic in the mood, and I appreciate the effort put into the elegant vocals. During your chorus, the “double-voice effect” is the right one, however, it would be perfect if you could double it with just a very very short delay between the original and the copy panned on the right for example. I would have mixed this track with less presence on your vocals, because your melodic lines are also quite interesting to listen. BTW, your vocal technique reminds me the one used by some famous singers… like brian ferry, for example, try to find and replay “Don’t Stop the Dance” for example, a very elegant way to sing.
Hi Kurz, thanks for your comments and your suggestions. I will try to improve the mix. This is my first serious (almost!) attempt to make a song with renoise. All instruments except drums are made from a single sawtooth waveform with different chains of effects for each sound. I’m very excited with Renoise…