To embed from Bandcamp, look at this topic. For future reference, I just made it a bookmark to access it with ease.
About the track: this is pretty interesting for your first Renoise song! Although I can’t really listen to it for over two minute without getting a bit bored, the chiptune-y, 8-bit sounds (I’m not genre savvy, so correct me if i’m wrong) are pro. The sound design in general is top notch, but the harmonics and feel could of been changed up a lot more to make it more interesting - or just given more space/panning to give the listener’s ear a bit of rest throughout the 5 minutes run time. Given the layout of Renoise its very easy to forget that the listener has an entirely different perspective than the creator of the song - try not to get carried away.
The dissonant solos at 3:14 are very, very cool. You really could of changed it into an entirely different song at that part, but had to return to those somewhat church-bellish harmonics in the background and the vocals, which were a-ok but nothing to scream home about.
Overall: fantastic first song in terms of sound, I mean FANTASTIC, but it gets somewhat boring and musically “eh” later on.
Long post is long, but hope I helped.