Yes, until it’s finished. 
If you don’t post a playable link, let me do this quickly for you:
Yes, it sounds like an old demoscene tune. And I can hear that you’re from Denmark, it’s the typical “Thomas Mogensen kinda like style”. You know what I mean, don’t you? I’ve read the mix is dry, nevertheless some more “punch” or let’s say “woomp” would be nice.
This is a Rap beat, he needs to find a rapper, not a singer. 
But he could also use AI instead. Check this at 14:48. Or just sell the beat to someone who could rap but sucks at creating beats respectively music.
I think this is one of your best compositions, especially the second part of the song. There’s some subtle aggression in it, I like it. Nice guitar, too. I like its tone. Well done. Furthermore the balance of the mix is good. Unfortunately it lacks depth respectively impact, it sounds very flat overall, especially the kick. The kick doesn’t kick, which is a pitty. If you’d fix that you’d have a pretty good tune right here.
I think so, too. This one sounds better, the balance is good. Just don’t listen to people who’re telling you that the kick needs to be twice as loud or even louder as the rest. Of course that’s not the reality. You can hear it yourself, right? But one question comes to mind: Do you have Soundcloud or something like that? Or do you post your short snippets only on Instagram? And why?
@lilith
Yup, that song with that snare is a different story, right? Sounds way better than before with that metallic reverbed snare. Did you add the “water drip effect” in the background, or was it already there? I can’t remember. That effect sounds nice. Personally I would contribute this song to the competition, not the other one. Just because this one slaps more. But it’s your decision. The other one was good, too. 