Imminent State - Fifth Gear


(cantti) #1

Hello.

Besides reggae i like to make synthwave music. I made a few tracks in renoise and i’m planning to make full album


#2

Just quickly mention, I’d probably slightly shorten the intro part, so instead of say 1 minute before you get to the verse on the lead probably half that time? Maybe experiment with adding subtle slides on the lead to try to lessen the ‘static’ feel. I think your melody holds well even if you simplify it. Good luck with the album btw :slight_smile:

fourthgear.xrns


(stoiximan) #3

I like it and i agree with 4tey about the intro part.Lets see what else you have for us when your album comes out


(cantti) #4

Thanks for resposes

Just quickly mention, I’d probably slightly shorten the intro part, so instead of say 1 minute before you get to the verse on the lead probably half that time? Maybe experiment with adding subtle slides on the lead to try to lessen the ‘static’ feel. I think your melody holds well even if you simplify it. Good luck with the album btw :slight_smile:

fourthgear.xrns

I like yourxrns file.You recreated it very quickly andaccurately