vitaxin - just ice for all (goverment collapse edit)
Feedback needed!
woah, nice one again. I totally see the direction that this is meant to go to, but there are a few quirks in my opinion :
the whole thing is not dirty enough somehow … I would like much more grease, especially on the drums. But also the single instruments could need some constant subtle changing in the distortion or similar. It’s abit too tame at the moment.
The sidechaining (?) especially after 1:45 sounds awkward, probably because the basedrum is so soft, it does not sound like the base is pushing so hard that everything else ducks away, just like everything is ducking.
Also, it is kinda hectic/chaotic, I would say change the arrangement abit (what is does great intro-part doing at the end at 4:22 ?) and make it more hypnotic … This would make a great 7-8 minute track.
But again, great idea so far.
im gonna do a rework of it tomorrow, and put the last Beat_Outro as a Intro ;D 4/4 is good for mixing… anyway, that was my thought when inserting it at the end. im gonna cut down the noisy stuff at the start to, volume down. after request from In-Fluence. and try to get some Orchestral parts into it as a break. i got the vocals ready 
let see where this goes.
delayed 2 days. done editing sounds, working hard here. going to try something exezive 
combining work and music is really a bitch…
Quite tasty!
Bass sounds a bit weak maybe?
yuMMMMMMMM - up to 2:30, anyway. EQ could probably keep the drama rolling between 2:30 and 3:00.
I love the bass-heavy “break” at 1:45, apocalyptic / powerful / emotional.
I also love the density that the background sound effects add (the gurgly / harshly chorused stuff).
Just needs some further mastering expertise applied.
Ah… when you add vocals, dirty those up (lofimat or a bandpass or something). It will help with the apocalyptic drama thing going on.
Agreed with the 4:22 outro => intro, at least in part. The intro should be 00:00 to 00:29, 4:00 to 4:14, lose that bouncy thin melody part after, then 4:22 to 4:44, then resume as normal, then outro different altogether (maybe just a generic wind down which ends with [4:44 to end of current song).
Oooh listened again with a stack of codeine on my cortex
it’s PERFECT ! leave her alone
8D
let there be a sister.
Cool. ReSelekted.