Pretty good. Later on it doesn’t sound like much of a breakcore-ish remix. More of a softer IDM style track. If you’ve heard the Venetian Snares album Detrimentalist, and the song Poo your self jason, its sort of like it. It has amens and the like, but its somewhat lacking what would define it as breakcore. A higher bpm might solve this
Ok, so basically you think it looses it’s edge when the vocals enters, right? One way would be to loose the “in between lines” in the chorus and only keep the chopped up parts. Would leave more room for the drums, which could be developed kind of like the beginning, or even further.
I also thought about a higher bpm, but that’s not enough on it’s own. How much do you think the fact that I have chord progressions going on is taking away from the breakcoreish feel? I mean most tunes in that style would either have a looping progression or a single-chord groove.
At the end of the day I don’t really care what musical label it put on what-ever-I-generate, but I would to blend the more harder sound of for instance vsnares into my stuff.
Agreed with the last sentence. I don’t know how to improve the vocal parts because I don’t really use those in my tracks. Try like, breakcore amen mashes, then vocal samples. Like pitch shifting snares like you have in the beginning, to a vocal sample. Just breakcore techniques I don’t know what to say on the chord progressions either.