So… I drank lots of coffee and tracked. It’s not finished and I could use some hints on what to do next, as you can see it gets kind of silly in the end. 
hm i expected something harder, more distortion, crunchy sounds… where is the *core in this breakcore? 
Yeah, i agree, not much like breakcore, but sounds great so far! It is very similar to your other tracks on myspace.
… rockin so far…
mmm perhaps you could replace the “aaah” sound with some semi aggressive synth/gtr acid-ish burp kinda sound ? some subtle spookey atmos sounds to give more tension ? some variations on the intro ? lots of stuff you could do 
nice man