Hi, lw_pss, nice to see you here 
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Interesting production but needs some more work on it. The tune works pretty good as ambient, especially background tune, but it easily starts to be boring if we are talking about stand-alone listening - because of not much changing and very repeatable structure in there. It could be cut and stretched without a big loss circa two times. Anyway, the sound itself is well done and with depth. Reminds a bit of Bjørn Lynne (Worms tunes), what I consider as positive thing.
Greetings.
glad to see you too 
this is more background music, but yes, I agree that the song can be easily trimmed
big thanks for the review
btw, I really like your song called “in this mood”, such a beautiful piano piece