Possibly my last song of 2022, time for a month or so off…maybe. Unless inspiration strikes
The mix is too concentrated on the mid
The EQ on the voice need more “air”
My humble advice
All advice welcome I’m not great at mixing haha
You will stop to learn at your death🙂
Learn as if you’d live forever, live as if you’d die tomorrow.
I think the vox is too forward in the mix and the guitar/bass/rhythm section needs a little more oomph/low frequency bump
are you sidechaining the mix to the vox? If so, it sounds like you could ease off on the compression a touch
nice work, though, and respect for playing instruments and singing!
Ohh but there’s not a single real instrument in there at all, it’s all VSTi’s…though it is my voice
Guitar sounds great, and dig the chorus/chant effect on the vocals.