there it is, another preview, very “nightish”, mmmh well, whatever it’s a good one ! 
update: finished !
Sounds very nice until now, i like the processed drums and the overall melodys. The only thing i don’t like, is that high lead, which comes in around 0:40. I’m looking forward hearing the complete track. 
indeed, i didn’t thought much of it either (the high lead), so i wiped it clean .
by the way i also changed the “master” filter around, but i’m thinking it might be a bit much too “overload”, though it seems ok on my headphone 
(hd650 thingie), think i’ll need to buy some classic hp to figure it out one day…
anyway same link for the mp3
Sweet! 
The pizzicato thing reminds a bit of some song i heard some time ago, but i can’t remeber exactly. If you’re looking for ideas, on how to continue this track - i would do a breakdown at 1:36 and leave out the drums for 2 patterns or so instead of the melody transposing, after that begin with the drums again with only few instruments in the background and go a bit freaky with the drums and begin with a second theme or use the old one. I would keep the melody transposing for the end of the song to build a finish.
Greets, Alex
Congrats on the Drums & Percussions . they are incredible. Overall I like the song but I think it gets a little bit boring after some time. Probably you could try to make some breaks, a solo part or something to keep it interssting for the listener.
keeps evolving hehe, added a needed break as suggested and well it lasts around 3min now, more polishing and it should be good
thx for the tips 
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same url still, i always upload my work in progress .
Time for you to finish this song now, hehe.
done !
the song is finished , thanks for your input, it helped .
always same url
Nice work on beats and bass. I like the overall atmosphere the tune creates. The used synthesizers sound warm and mostly balanced. I’m missing something that stands out more in the intro part - through all this “mud”, a larger, out-standing instrument or vocal would come nice.
I like the lead coming in around 1:44 - the whole ensemble becomes a little bit empty here. Besides thickening up that lead-synth a little, I’d throw in some background fills, filter gadgets and/or a supporting second melodic layer.
(…why is the end cut off in this .mp3 ?)
Nice work. I like what I hear.
fixed the missing “silence” at the end of the song, wonder how i missed that , and changed a few things while i was there
Ha, and i thought my downloaded *.mp3 was corrupt. 
Really nice tune!