Move On (Stan Aires Mix)

Move On (Stan Aires Mix) [Silk Digital remix competition entry] - Shingo Nakamura & Kazusa

Silk Music was holding a contest till 10th May, and here is my remix competition entry! Did any one else here participate?
All done in Renoise.

I wish I done better. It’s the first time I ever remixed anything. Well OK, it’s the first time I launch a remix into the outer world. 3 out of 10 - that’s my opinion. But I’m glad I tried.

EDIT: forgot the full title. also here is the original version.

No one likes it. I knew it. :unsure:

The first 3 notes in the original remind me of:

Bet a dj can put an acapella on top and it would blend perfectly with the original or your remix :) , about yer rmx:

Nice & clean remix, good production, not my particular style of music so can’t comment much.