Please give me feedback, thanx
-Your percussion can be pushed back more to the background, the basic rhythm and breaks are okay.
-Your chord track sounds pretty raw without effects, these need some work.
-Your leads are too repetitive and could really use more variations.
-Perhaps you could lend some vocals from ccmixter.org and see if you can build a trance track around that (using vocals usually works pretty inspiring).
Further i would suggest to listen to other trance tracks and compare them to your tracks and see what is similar in the mix and what sounds odd.
Cheers…