Reminds me a bit on MARC ALMOND and I like it. I think the vocals are too loud, especially at the beginning. You could use an EQ with a sharp boost to find painful frequencies in the vocals and lower these a bit. The beat at 1:10 is great, very 80s. I would use less compression to make it sound more lively. Lyrics are fine too.
Maybe look into some MARC ALMOND stuff to compare you mix to it.
I don’t think that the vocals are to high, i like them, but i also think they are a bit to loud. In my opinion the track sounds very “messy” and lacks dynamics, needs EQ, level adjustments, also to much Reverb/Room overall. Maybe it’s because i listen on mobile (with a ok headset), but it also sounds as if you decreased the overall quality of the audio file (maybe it was on purpose or it is the phasing effect on the pad/synth). At the end it’s personal taste.