Neuheim - Gorgonzola

Renoise Songs
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Ok, so my second tune on the forum (work in progress)

http://soundcloud.com/rexronny/neuheim-gorgonzola

NEW VR.

http://soundcloud.com/rexronny/neuheim-gorgonzola_vr2

Any suggestions?

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Same as with your other post…like your sound selection and general atmosphere. You could create some variety by drying it up and having a part that is more up front in the mix. Also, I think it could use a couple other parts/elements.