New Track : Lordy

Finished this track in about a day and a half, so mixing could be tighter, any suggestions?

A link maybe?

Haha, sorry, that was really stupid :P, here it is…http://soundcloud.com/d0omfinger/lordy

Thanks.
A nice clean cut btw…could perhaps use some more subtile elements here and there… But that’s not my strongest point either.

http://soundcloud.com/d0omfinger/lordy

thanks! hm, yes, i know what you mean, some ambient noises in a few of the parts would help to fill it out :D