Finally, a tune I can say is more or less finished after a year of nothing 
http://www.zshare.net/audio/587431228b5f8896/
Comments welcome as usual.
http://www.zshare.net/audio/58824419194d2a12/
Just a slightly updated version, and a shameless ‘bump’
yeep, nice work!
im not into liquid sounds at all, but the melodies are very well made. maybe, but thats just an opinion, you could cut the pads…imo its more than 50% of what make liquid tunes so cheesy. the pizzicatos are great, bass also but could benefit of being more powerful (sometimes they go way too high -reaching the end, it sounds more like speed farts…the last bass sound is the limit imo).
the snares could also get more deepness. try pitching them down a little and layer them with a sub bass w/reverb. good patterns nevertheless.
Wow, nice track dude. I’m diggin.
Please get rid of the fuckin zshare, first it doesn’t let me use ABP, and when disabling it, it shows me so many banners trying to cheat money from me that I had to “Skip this ad” couple of times before I even could see your song.
Nice music though.
Real sorry about the zshare thing guys, my popup blocker’s obviously pretty effective!
nice tunes man.
P1cK m3 Up = very enjoyable!
I’m still battling with ‘punchyness’ to be honest, but I’ve upped what I think is a slight improvement…
http://www.loopproject.com/filebase/renois…-doctrinate.mp3
I forgot I had this little spce here, I’ll be upping some RNinstruments for it real soon
*edit: changed drums a bit and filled it out with the aid of the awesome spectrum analyser GCD pointed out.