Okay writing while listening. That sample at the start, just a guess, but is that miami vice?
Nice little beat to go with it.
01:53 now finally some change in the song. 80s style synth added, not sure if this really did the song any good, it’s too loud i think. And maybe not “right”.
I would definitaly find something more “bouncy”, sounds like this synth “drowns” the rest of the song alot.
Make it more progressive; instead of just copying the same pattern over and over again to make the song as long as possible, try to make each pattern unique, it really makes the song more interesting to listen to.
Just my opinion