Please! I Need Your Valuable Opinion.

Would you please help me improve by giving me your valuable opinion about the song I newly put in renoise songs page here: http://www.renoise.com/songs.php?pg=artist&id=1246
Your suggestions and recommendations will be appreciated indeed.
Thanks. :)

Yeowch! That lead is waaay too loud. Pity, the intro really had me into it. Yeah, the whole track is too loud - you need to drop the levels and any master compression. There’s a good vibe hiding behind all this loudness!

Hunt out more of the bass. Tune up the kick and bass-synth separately.

Arrangement wise this a good tune - I like the key change in the middle - it gets funky! Although the sections feel a bit stock with their repetitions of the same theme. Variety will add gold.

Thanks Foo, I’m going to make the recommended changes. :)