Though I know the mix is much too long (and got some disturbing windows live messenger signals in it - sorry for that) I just wanted to show you the idea.
Because I’m addicted to it. 
Done with renoise 2.7.2, Korg M3, Yamaha CS1X and only Superwave P8 plugins and samples I created myself. 
Enjoy.
At least I enjoyed it. Because though it’s too long, I find it to sound great.
Any other opinion yet?
I love it.
Now, this is what I would call an “Extended Version” 
Those MSN sounds, are they in the mix by accident because you recorded the whole computer output, or was it just for fun? Reason I ask, is that they actually kinda fit in, strictly harmony-wise, in that minor scale that you got going on, hehe.
No, but seriously, I guess this could turn into a decent trance tune, if you manage to arrange it all down to a few minutes, tighten up everything, work on some thought-out build-ups, etc etc
However, it sounds very “generic”… maybe you could add something that would give it a more personal and original signature?
Those MSN sounds are accidentally and I knew while recording they would be in there. But you’re right. Funny enough it seems to fit.
Does this still sound very generic?
Otherwise I missed something. 
I did another remix after tightening and working out and got now something I could turn it into:
http://soundcloud.com/dr4g0n76/disco-bitch
I think I’ll call it DISCO BITCH