Hello people i hope you are doing well .
i am currently working on this one ,any feedback will be noted.Vocals are only one take so dont spank me 
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I like this.
Positives:
The abruptly stopped reverb effect on the vocals.
The vocal melody.
The general vibe.
The one note bass line at the beginning and end.
Negatives:
The part in the middle (begins 1.23) sounds a tad conventional to my ears.
The bass is maybe too loud? Just a little bit? And the lead synth too.
Vocal’s a bit muddy.
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Thanks Sam for the pointers.About that part in 1.23,this is how i wanted it to go, conventional-familiar, i think for this type of song is enough but with me you never know what will come out by the time i finish it,if i finish it that is.
For me that is okay, I appreciated the listening and the composition.Your voice have some electro-rock touch and that make some well contrast with the EDM beat.
The only thing is that the voice seems sometimes a bit too behind or blurry than the other instruments. Maybe the pronunciation could be sometime more accentuated, especialy on louder rythm parts.
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