I’ll type random points as I’m hearing the tune for the 2nd time.
As per usual your percussion work is excellent.
The mix is great, lots of lo-fi, lots of noise, and no fatigue.
I like how your percussion relate to your other parts - how some parts are percussion, some are tonal, most are both. Since your percussion is so strong it allows you to be more creative with your other parts I think.
The ambience is great - it’s not too dry or wet.
I was waiting for a restful bridge of some sort - something less busy and more raw. (I was thinking something before the boom boom section at 2:50).
Thanks Mick for your opinion! The plan was originally to have a nice drone like athmo part instead of the “techno” section, but as i was already quite off from the original i’ve decided to bring some elements from it back, so it has a bit more recognition value instead. Also i didn’t get too much athmos out of the stem tracks to work with, to which i have restricted myself mainly despite some one shot drums and the vocal.