some of my work (dark wave, minimal wave) - constructive criticism is

Hello community,

I’ve been doing music with Renoise as a hobby for almost 10 years now. It is quite minimalistic, dark music. I have only now thought of joining the Renoise forum (I am not particularly good in networking …)

For two of the songs I have made videos.

“Eros & Thanatos” is from the year 2013 and completely made with Renoise. For the video I used a frozen chicken as a puppet.

The second video, “They send me to the stars”, was created last week as an emotional response to the current world situation. The text is from the movie “Planet of the Apes (1968)” in german, it is the part in which Taylor asks whether people are still fighting each other. For the song, I used Renoise as well as an Akai mini. The video material I have cut from a documentation of the Discovery Chanell and an animation of the NASA Laboratory.

I would be very pleased about constructive criticism. And sorry for my bad englisch.

[http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=bW-SvOT3tKM]

[http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=SBB6sJohxtI]

Mmm, sorry, there is missing a part in the title (I did not notice that there is a limitation for characters): “constructive criticism is welcome”