Alrightie, I saw this song forum again and wondered, why not?
Well, it certainly is not finished at all, it needs far more stuff on it. And I know the ending is vague, it’s unfinished… 
My renoise experience is less then a year, started around June '07 with the demo, I was like 14 then. 
I worked with FL studio before but the cough crack cough expired.
My brother told me to check out Renoise and I’m still loving it.
(No, I paid for Renoise, don’t worry. Best 60 euro ever spent in my life.)
Anyhow, the part of the song I uploaded also has it imperfect parts 
and needs a better intro, but I’ll still be using the backwards part.
Well, tell me what you think.
Be polite. 
edit: link updated