Song I Made

heres a track i made combining various software (logic, renoise and soundtrack pro) it features my voice and guitar recoded on my shitty macbook pro mic and then some minimal drums its all rough at the moment and not finished but would greatly appreciate the feedback :) thanks everyone whoops forgot the link : http://files.me.com/dthomas86/i6sf8r.mp3 its under a different project called hi-Zed

Nice atmosphere!

cheers man just dont know where to go from here lol

I would say introduce some bass. My first thought was synth bass or strings, but maybe you could record another guitar part and re-pitch it.

Incidentally, I have heard people get some very odd sounds from electric guitar using a violin bow…