totally sunmixed perpetuous dreamer - the sound of goodbye
pure renoise of course 
comments welcome as always.
hey ! i changed load of stuff, it sounds much more polished now ! 
same url of course.
Sounds great to me. Some distorted clipped sounds around 2:05-2:30, and maybe a bit of excess with reverb in that background pad (or whatever it is)… but in general, it seems that you really enjoyed a lot mixing this song.
wayhay ! this second version certainly makes it sparkle… i can tell you added a LOT. it’s hard to remix this one i guess because the original is that great. none the less, good job. shivers
indeed there was too much reverb, i removed it all, much better.
the hardest part is to sync the voice, after that everything just sorta flows 
I’ve been comparing the original version and I prefer yours, indeed! 