New work in progress. Worth spending more time on? What do you think?
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I like it, it has a nice groove going on.
Maybe add a little something in the intro to “brighten” it. A sound effect in the back ground or a little extra pop in the percussion, kind of a theme on the shaker that comes in later.
It seems like it could use a bridge somewhere, as there’s a certain amount of repetition in the melody, Maybe that’s what you’re going for but it doesn’t seem to “resolve” itself to me.
Nice tune though, I found my self bobbing my head whilst listening
Well done
Thanks for the feedback 
Yeah, I agree. Need to make it more interesting soundwise, and also more variation, it gets kind of boring now. More details, fx etc. Agree about the melody too, I wasn’t really going for repetitiveness (is that a word?) no… 
Think I’ll try some automation on the main theme, but I’m planning to mix it up with some other synths maybe
Thinking maybe from 5:10 would be a good time to switch it up a little at least
liked the groove… overall vibe was pretty sexy. repetitive ? well… its techno after all… i thought it could use some more drums… (hats/perc/fills) etc. yeah sexy groove. keep working on it :] it worth it imo.