Hi Vereiser, I have enjoyed the song in a whole, but I have some criticisms regarding the arrangement:
first of all, I think you have tried to humanize the tempo a bit too much, resulting into a jumpy execution, while in contrast there seem to be much less attention in the dynamics, expecially for the strings; for example, look at how hard the background violins are from 1’27"; there is nothing wrong with them sounding loud if that was the intention, and the contrast with the other instruments is actually nice, but then, at 2’38", they suddenly disappear, leaving a big sense of void, which maybe was intended too, but left me unsatisfied.
with a better development of the violins and a general work of retouching, this could be really beautiful!
This seems to be a good adwise. I think, you’re right. The violine is important for the song.
So I will give the violine the chance to be the background all the time.
I know a guy which can play violine.
I think, I have to work on quantization. The flow is a bit, yes, you said it: “humanized”. The guitar is not flowy enough.
In almost the same matter the piano, sometimes.
Thanx for your adwise. The next version will be released soon.