Do you really want constructive criticism? I can say what l think about it but you might get weird and l don’t want to cause a scene.
Wow, you really know how to be constructive.
I would class the song as “Muzak”, it’s the sort of thing l’d hear at the end of the night when a TV channel stops broadcasting and they have an advert for about 20 minutes saying when broadcasting will begin again and what documentaries will be on and also you can advertise here etc.
I don’t know how it would be improved, it fulfils whatever style it is cast in, ya know. Was that a guitar sample from “Firestarter” btw?
Really? You’re calling this elevator music? I’d like to find that elevator.
There is no guitar samples here, it’s all synthetic.