It lacks a some little things to be finished, but I can’t put my finger on it yet.
https://soundcloud.com/pplo/pplo-affront-wip/s-JFJrs
Oh soundcloud links … why are you always fighting me?
Really good work (although I am not a fan of dancecore). If it lacks something, I would articulate it as “popular arrangement”. The thing is, if you openly admit/advert, that it is a cross-breed track, then it will always lack something, because it can only be an intersection of the genres.
If there is something you could spend time on, then it is the diversity of the hi-hats. The high end in general has a little space left to fill, I reckon.
Very interesting and constructive comment. Thank you for the feedback.
I’ll be sure to post the final version here later.