Hi guys,
I posted in here a few weeks ago about a trance track I am working on using Renoise. I got some very useful feedback, in particular that it sounded flat, which was possibly due to EQing. To cut a long story short, EQing was indeed an issue, but lots of other stuff as well, which I don’t need to bore you with. 
The reason I’m back is because I feel my track has got a whole lot better, and I’m really starting to believe that somebody might be interested in publishing it. What I am asking is for some of you to take a listen and, if necessary, burst my bubble. If there are things wrong with my track then I want to hear about it before submitting it in the publisher’s dropbox. I can’t ask my friends or relatives because none of them know anything about music and so they’ll all just say it is good. 
You can hear it here. The clip comprises the second half of the song, it begins abruptly so don’t start it with the volume high:
http://homepage.ntlworld.com/richard-wild/music/trance5.ogg
For those who are interested, it’s wholly composed with Renoise, mostly using synths from Superwave and Renoise’s built-in DSPs. The only processing I did outside of Renoise was, I applied some parallel compression using Audacity, to bring out some of the detail and give it a bit more life.
If you take a listen then thanks very much for your time, it’s really appreciated.
