Ok, I need help… obviously I’m not going to get any big points in the loudness war as these stand right now so turn up your volume a bit. I just struggle with my sound a bit in general, next to something professional, or just good 
, my stuff is way off I think. Any kind of advice would be greatly appreciated. This is my first stab at anything remotely serious for over a decade so I’m a bit rusty. Feel free to comment on anything, like choice of instruments etc…
http://soundcloud.com/backman/01-still-life-v10
http://soundcloud.com/backman/03-easyline-v04
[edit] Going to try a few things on these and rather not have them up til I’m once again out of ideas, or consider them done… so I’ve taken them down for now 