Piece made with Renoise, Analog Lab, Synthmaster, and some samples. I hope you enjoy it. Happy listening….https://soundcloud.com/olivier-564197768/sound-of-the-forest?si=68883e6ccfb54b028922a33f4a683f6a&utm_source=clipboard&utm_medium=text&utm_campaign=social_sharing
It seem that your bass are stereo…Couldn’t be pressed on vinyl…
But could be the future
Good instrumentation, I get the idea. But I suggest a quicker buildup. Don’t wait too long until you add new instruments. Drop 1:14-1:21, that part isn’t necessary, use the following part 1:21-1:35 as the intended break. There’s no variation from 1:35 to 2:49, at 2:50 only a clap was added and it takes another 30 seconds until you finally added some melody related stuff, which is way too long. And on top of that it doesn’t last long, it disappears shortly after that insted of adding more melody related stuff. So basically almost the whole tune is a drumbeat. You should speed up your buildup, increase variations and bring more sounds in general. And follow the 2-instrument-rule, which means when you add instruments while building your song, add at least 2 at the same time. Faster buildup, more variations, more options.
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Hello
First of all, thank you for taking the time to listen…
It’s true, I let some time pass in the song; maybe I was lacking inspiration…
I wanted to create a dynamic with the bass, then I had the late idea to include a synth, but I’m getting a bit lost in all that…
I’m going to shorten the song and review my synth leads
maybe change the spirit of the song…
In any case, I’ve taken note of your suggestions; that’s how we move forward…