I haven’t finished it yet but i think i have something good.Tell what you think of it
Lyrics
You are mine
I want you
You are mine
I need you
I am going to get you
No matter were you go
No matter were you hide
I am going to get you
You cannot hide from me
I am Unstoppable
I am going to get you
No matter were you go
No matter what you do
I am going to get you
You cannot hide from me
I want that smile
I think you are right, you have started a good work, well constructed! This sound rather new-wave and electro, lyrics and voice give tension, fit with the sound.
The song title is catchy 
also I appreciate the brighter touch at the end of the lyrics. Keep it up!
Thanks Fabrice always nice to read your comments and since you are a pro musician it really means a lot to me
Stoix! Very much enjoyed this one. Something that is very Lynchian about the vibe, sort of a David Bowie/Lost Highway feel (but, don’t get me wrong, very much it’s own thing). I like music that has a slight melancholia to it, and one that plays with light and dark - and I think this fits the bill - love your singing and the overall lushness of the tune. Agree, you have something good - look forward to seeing where it leads!
I live for comments like this,and i think we all need a little encouragement to go on that is why i make similar comments to everyone posting music here.Thank you TheCytha