I love metal done in trackers This is a nice chunky 6/8 vibe. Once it gets heavier at :49, the guitar tones sound really good.
It’s got a really nice theme, I think vocals could work nice here. The theme change near the end is nice, I think it could have worked earlier on as well to give it some variety.
Overall really nice stuff, I could definitely listen to more of this! Well done
The laid-back, quieter parts makes me think of some guy on top of a building, hair blowing in the wind, playing the guitar, being filmed with a long-zoom camera.
The heavier parts really grab me, carrying me along somewhere. I’m not sure where but it’s somewhere nice.
The alternate part at the end promises more goodness from your band.
Nice track. I personally like the rawness, but then i am sometimes prefer a raw sound in metal. No criticisms on composition, though as suggested, some careful eq may make it shine. The last riff .