Time’s up, case closed, no more songs to come, let’s start the vote. 
You’ve created a nice mood here, even if your cat isn’t recognizable as a cat. Unfortunately your mix is completely off. You didn’t check through speakers, did you? You can increase the volume of the organ by at least 12 dB and decrease the volume of the drums (except kick) and percussions by around 20 dB easily. If you do that you’d push the atmosphere and the song will become at least twice as good. You should also learn how to use eq, compressors and maximizer the right way. Check the mixing thread, that’s a good start to improve your mixing skills.
Yes, you missed to fix some mixing issues. But most importantly the song is complete now. I like the second half, nice melodies. It would have been even nicer if you pushed the background stuff, instruments like the “saw sigh” and the main melodies a little more. 220 BPM and 24/25 LPB is an interesting setup. You should get some etxra points for composing under these conditions. 
Of course it has more plays and likes, you posted this two weeks earlier than your second song.